至急！英検の1次試験のwritingについての質問です 「do you think it is good for children to join team sports such us basketball or soccer?」 的な質問をされて、私は 「I think basketball is good for children to join team sports. I have two reasons. First reason, basketball's children are able to practice at home anytime. Second reason, basketball's children are able to compete people of around world. That's why i think basketball is good for children to join team sports.」 と答えました。 これは何点貰えるでしょうか。 優しくアドバイスしていただきたいです。
「I think basketball is good for children to join team sports. I have two reasons. First reason, basketball's children are able to practice at home anytime. Second reason, basketball's children are able to compete people of around world. That's why I think basketball is good for children to join team sports.」 あなたの回答は明確で分かりやすく、論理的に話が進んでいます。それにもかかわらず、いくつかの文法的な修正が必要です。 正しい文法で修正すると、回答は次のようになります。 "I think basketball is good for children to join as a team sport. I have two reasons. First, basketball allows children to practice at home anytime. Second, basketball enables children to compete with people from around the world. That's why I think basketball is good for children to participate in team sports." この回答は、主題に対する明確な意見を述べており、2つの理由も明確に示されています。英語の文法的な修正を反映すると、あなたの回答は理解されやすくなります。ただし、スコアリングに関しては、他の要素も考慮されるため、この回答だけでは正確な点数を予測することはできません。他の質問や文法の正確さも重要な要素です。
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